Writing



Writing In Writing class, my peers and I were separated into appropiate groups of our writing levels. In my group we read an Andy Gritheffs story called Shower. It was about a boy who wanted to fill the water right to the top of the shower. All types of annoying things happen to him as the story goes on. We had to write a similar story about something that you have always wanted to do. Mine is about a boy who wants to be famous. So he decides to create a drink for his Mum on Mothers Day. Here is my Story:  

When we did our Portal Story we started off just doing our plan. Miss S talked us through her Plan Man then we set off to start doing our plan. My story is about a girl who is in a Talent Show and she falls through a piece of paper and ends up being a mermaid. It was pretty easy after I got going on it. I didn’t have much trouble. Here is my Portal Story: 



The whole class had to write a letter to a company for a complaint, idea or they were just congratulating them for their successful work. I wrote a letter to Wonka for an idea to improve on the Red Skins. I was thinking about making a lollipop. It had to be formal and I had a bit of difficulty keeping it that way. I used a Thesaurus to help me at times to use more ‘grown up’ words. I hope they listen to my letter. Here is my letter to Wonka: 